The P.E.R.F.E.C.T. World

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Setting
The year is 2010. War has dissapeared. Ever since the government introduced P.E.R.F.E.C.T., a "perfect" system, there is no sadness among people anymore. All there is is happiness, everywhere. There are no malfunctions in this system.

Or are there? Some think different. Because with P.E.R.F.E.C.T. there is no freedom. Because the system does not allow people to think different, the people who think different have to hide. They are an underground group ,called FALSE, battling for freedom, battling for a revolution!

Storyline
Today is the big day for FALSE. They have been making plans for this day for years. Today is the revolution! But the Government knows of their plans...

Sides
Police
You will protect the goverment from getting destroyed and arrest every FALSE member you can find.
Being a police man means you are able to handle guns and know fighting skills.

Civilian
Will you help FALSE with their plans or betray them?
Being a civilian means you are not able to handle guns.

FALSE
This is your big day! Time for a revolution.
Being a FALSE member means you know some nice fighting skills and of course you know your way with a sword. Every FALSE member has a special sword designed to reflect Police bullets. This means a fight with a police man usually means fighting.

Rules (sort of)
-Everything happens in the big city.
-You cannot escape the city.
-You cannot call in help from some other country.
-No godmodding.
-You can make new characters if your old ones die.

-No more than 5 characters.


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My characters coming in the next post!
 
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Name: Jordon
Age: 19
Side: FALSE
Gender:Male
Bio: Jordon was a free runner (parkour) the year before P.E.R.F.E.C.T was introduced, He had a choice, Join the rest of the world in being a single unit or run away and find some freedom, He choose freedom, He now roams the cities scaling, climbing and even jumping scouting around for the FALSE.

He has a sword that is twice his size and the blade is the colur black, around the edge its colur is silver,Carved into the blade it says "Freedom" as long as he has his sword by his side he knows why he joined this fight, Why he will fight!

Description/Description Pic: Quite tall 6'1, Blonde hair, His eye colur is a mixture of three colurs Brown, Green and Blue. Quite atheletic, Wears a dark hoodie that covers his face most of the time, Has a long fringe, Doesn't speak often. He is a loner in the FALSE.

Other Info: Can do acrobatics, Parkour and skilled with a blade.
 

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Name:Jean Lafitte or the Inquisitor
Age:43
Side:police
Gender:Male
Bio:He is the subcommander of all police forces in the districts where most F.A.L.S.E. activity takes place. He tortures and neutralizes all who oppose P.E.R.F.E.C.T.'s system, he is known as the Inquisitor. The Inquisitor is odd for a single reason, although he is one of P.E.R.F.E.C.T.'s best men he also is not part of their system that robs all form of independance, P.E.R.F.E.C.T.'s leaders consider this fine as he is completely devoted to them and this makes him more effective. He is known as cruel and awful and he makes sure to carry on that fact.
Description/Description Pic: This is what the Inquisitor pretty much looks like, he is 6' 2". It should be noted that he often carries a cane and wears a top hat. He usually carries an Uzi and a siezed F.A.L.S.E blade, though to date no police force has ever captured the types capable of deflecting bullets.
Other Info: He has been known to personally penetrate into parts of F.A.L.S.E thanks to his free mind and then completely destroy the Cell. He often wears disguises.
 

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Name: James
Age: 18
Side: FALSE
Gender: Male
Bio: He was only 12 when his parents were publicly executed. After that he swore revenge.

James was the youngest FALSE member ever to join. He is probably the most radical member around and doesn't hold back for anything. His actions are usually well organized but his determination has got him in trouble before. James has been arrested for the murder on multiple politicians in 2006 but broke out only 20 hours later.

Description/Description Pic:http://smartcine.com/images/jumper_still.jpg
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Name: Adam
Age: 40s
Side: Police
Gender: Male
Bio: Adam joined the police 15 years ago and has climbed up quickly. He is member of the special ops. He carries an Uzi in each hand.

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Name: Jon Waters
Age: 24
Side: FALSE
Gender: Male
Bio: He is a songwriter, guitarist, and an expert with the katana. When P.E.R.F.E.C.T. came along, and took away creative songwriting, he got angry, and joined FALSE.
Description/Description Pic:
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Kinda like hm, without the uniform and blood coming from head

Other Info: Has a Les Paul guiter in safe keeping, records of most songs made in hidden computers, and a katana made from a meteor, a black metal that nobody really knows what it is.
 

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Name: Leea
Age: 19
Side: FALSE
Gender: Female
Bio: Leea was very young when the city took over, and her parents were a big part of the movement to change it to PERFECT. At about 16, they took her out of the city for a day, and she realized just what the world was like without PERFECT.

When she joined, she was given a thin, but deadly sharp silver blade, curved slightly. That at her hip and her deep red lipstick are the two things you associate with her.

Description/Description Pic:
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Name:Calvin Winters
Age:20
Side:police
Gender:Male
Bio:Calvin was born when PERFECT was introduced and he was raised to live by PERFECT to the letter. when he heard of the group FALSE he immediately joined the force hoping to eradicate this group of "terrorists" as people used to say.
Description/Description Pic: 5"9 messy blonde hair green eyes and lives and breathes PERFECT.
Other Info:Blindly loyal will not submit till FALSE is destroyed.
 

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Name: Zach (Cant think of a last name, so lets leave it at Zach)
Age: 21
Side: Civilian
Gender: Male
Bio: Zach just finished his college degree in computer engineering at Michigan. He always lived without the perfect system, until he moved to The Big city. He went for job opportunity's, and found them. Now, he makes quite a bit of money each month working for a big company that specializes in computer manufacturing, design, and repair. Unusually athletic for someone who people would classify outside of the city as a nerd. Was in track and field and basketball at college.
Description/Description Pic: 6'2" Brownish blonde hair thats semi long. Shaggy if you will. Not very muscular even with all the athletic ability he has.
Other Info: Very good at anything to do with computers. Is stuck in the middle of the systems because P.E.R.F.E.C.T. has a somewhat right idea, but he knows that idea can never be a reality.
 

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Okay let's start then!

James walked into the city bank. The place was crowded. Civilians felt it in the air too. Something was about to happen. Never before had the security been so tight. He felt looked at by guards as he approached the bank assistant. 'Hello. I am here to retrieve cash from account #158378.' He said, smiling. He waited a few seconds and took a deep breath before saying the next: 'My name is Henrik Saland.' He saw the banker blink for a second. He recognised the FALSE identification. 'Uh, sure! Follow me, please.' James smiled. He looked at his watch for a second. 12:43:40. Everything was going just as planned.
 

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Jordon stood outside on the bank, James had just entered the bank Jordon looked at his watch 12:43:45, verything was going as planned, Jordon continued to scale the walls off the back to a more better posistion, This plan had to work.
 

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After James and the banker left the giant hall of the bank and had entered a smaller room with no-one else in it and no video cameras, James spoke to the man. 'Okay, great job. Do you have the keys?' The man answered with a grin. 'Oops forgot them! No, just kidding. Here they are.' James sighed. 'Okay thanks. Get back to your position. The man left the room and James was alone.

He locked both doors of the room and took his wig off. He opened his backpack and put on an outfit from the 'Brush and Clean' Company. He threw the clothes and the wig through the window and reopened the doors.


(( 'Brush and Clean' is a cleaning company who clean the bank ;) ))
 

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Jordon reached the west side of the building and entered through a window he was looking for james, Well waiting.

Jordon saw a camrea before it could turn to see him he disconnected the cable in the back.

"Problem solved" Jordon said as he waited once more.
 

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In a small building in another part of town... So the revolution starts today huh Jean! Oh, the revolution, yes it ENDS today. What? It's going to end my friend! Jean pulls out his uzi and guns down the man and two others who try to run, there are now four men left in the room. Now sirs, more gunshots are heard and a door is heard being broken down followed by a lot of yelling, I can kill you now, or you will be tortured and assimilated, you will be happy to here that the revolution will never get started. Who are you?!

I am Jean Lafitte or the Inquisitor! Jean takes off the mask. So my friends, die or fight? DIE! GAUGGH! He said die friends, said Jean as he removed the blade from the man closest to him who was about to pull a sword, now will any of you join him? We surrender! The two men pull their swords, one drops his, the other charges!

I'll kill you for killing my son! He yelled. How touching, Jean empties the uzi into his carcass and watches him fall the door is broken down. Sir! Yes? Are you fine? Yes I'm fine, there was a little resistance, but, he points at the remaining man, I got one, bring him in for interrogation and torture. One other thing Lieutenant. Yes? Make sure that the curfew is mantained and that no one is in the wrong place, get that? Yes Sir! Good, F.A.L.S.E. thinks it's on the first act, too bad it's the last HA HA HA HA HA!
 
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James found Jordon waiting on him in the next room. He greeted him quickly and then went over to business. He opened his backpack and revealed another Brush and Clean outfit. 'Okay, you know what to do, right? Put this on and follow me. We'll seperate after we clean out the Control room. It's located on the second floor. There should be around 4 armed guards in there plus some innocent workers. I want them all dead -- There is no room for failure and there have to be sacrifices for our revolution. I'll go and take care of equipment in there while you go down to prepare to prepare the bomb.'

He opened the door and changed the expression on his face to a cheerful cleaner who was on his way to do his job. 'Hey, uh, Jordon, look at all this ugliness! We really need to clean this place!'
 

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Jordon followed James, he heard the instructions clearly.

"I want them all dead" Jordon muttered to him self, He carried on following James, Now with the cleaners suit on, The suit was twice his size.

"Who did you have to kill to get this Jump suit? King-Kong?!" Jordon said to James.
 

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So, my little friend, someone is going to blow up the bank? Y..Y...Ye...Yes! Well, isn't that nice, okay boys you strech him and I'll go check on the bank! A little while later 4 P.E.R.F.E.C.T. Official cars pull up in front of the bank. I want this place sweeped! I want everyone in the main hall understand! Yes Sir! I'll go check on the control room who knows what they might do there. Jean and two other men rush to the control room passing a few cleaning men along the way. Hey! All of you cleaning men go to the main hall now! Jacob escort them. Yes sir! Jacob approaches the men and orders them to go to the main hall...
 

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Meanwhile Zach had walked into the bank to make his monthly pay deposited. Everything going well today sir? I say to the banker. "ye- no..." he says when the cops storm in.
 

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James was shocked by the sudden appearance of the Police men. He did not have time to think of an answer for Jordon's last sentence. He was escorted downstairs when he thought of a clever plan. He tapped the escorter's shoulder. 'Uh, I'm sorry.. In the hurry I left my broom upstairs. Please let me get it.. I will be back in a few minutes!' The man looked at James suspiciously for a few seconds and then shrugged. 'Whatever. 'Better be back quick.' He muttered.

James turned around and quickly whispered something in Jordon's ear. 'There's no time anymore. Prepare Plan B. Skip the control room.' He ran upstairs and looked at his watch. 12:51:05

Adam stormed in the bank. He didn't believe a single word of what Jean had heard, but he decided to join to team. His eye started to look for suspicious people but Adam quickly closed the eye. 'These guys have been planning this for years. They will not be noticed this easily.' He muttered to himself. He wondered what he would if he was a FALSE member.

James ran upstairs and hoped that Jordon remembered Plan B. 'He'd better not cause any trouble.' He muttered. He knew he probably had to if he wanted to get out alive this place. Things were supposed to blow up at 1 o'clock. Was he going to make it?
 

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Nothing in here! Stupid! That idiot gave me the wrong trail! I swear he's not going to have ANYTHING when I'm through with him. Come, the fool must have tried to trick us! We will show him! In the main hall... Alright people, this is all perfectly normal! Please complete your banking transactions and leave the building immediately! Ahhh, Jacob how did it go? Good, the one guy went back for his broom. His what! Did he come back? Come to think of it no. YOU IDIOT! We must find that man! Jean pulls out a radio and describes, I forgot his name Vendetti's F.A.L.S.E. character, and orders that all free security forces sweep the building for him. Jacob what happened to that other fellow? He's right there. Jacob points at a man standing in the corner. Well, could you go get him in one of our cars and get him to the facility? In the meantime, Jean turns and rushes into the building, I will find that other idiot myself! As Jean rushes down the hall Jacob grabs Jordan and tells him they're going for a little ride.
 

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As Jean grabs Jordon, Jordon smashes Jeans head off the wall then runs upstairs seeing James as he passes.

Jordon pulled something out of his pocket and started throwing them all over the walls.

"Bombs set! James run!" Jordon yelled as the watch hit 12:59, Jordon bolted for a window he pushed James out first then jumped out sliding down the building with his sword.

"Hold on!" Jordon yelled as they landed.
 
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