Contest Submissions "A Day in the Life"

Vote for your favorite stories. Multiple votes - 1 per story

  • Why?

    Votes: 3 8.6%

  • Demolition Man

    Votes: 1 2.9%

  • The Train Job

    Votes: 4 11.4%

  • The Daily Toils of a Worker in the West

    Votes: 3 8.6%

  • The Low Level Trader

    Votes: 3 8.6%

  • The Last Duel

    Votes: 3 8.6%

  • The Song of Onyx

    Votes: 6 17.1%

  • Just Dessert

    Votes: 3 8.6%

  • Tomorrow Will Be Better

    Votes: 5 14.3%

  • Times Are Changing

    Votes: 2 5.7%

  • The Days of Glory

    Votes: 3 8.6%

  • A Mercenary's Life

    Votes: 11 31.4%

  • Alariens: A Simple Man

    Votes: 9 25.7%

  • No Rest for the Weary

    Votes: 8 22.9%

  • Another Day at the Market

    Votes: 2 5.7%

  • Wandering World 8, Life of a Trapper

    Votes: 5 14.3%

  • A Frenchman Visits the West

    Votes: 3 8.6%
  • Total voters
    35
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DeletedUser

I voted for my Top 3: (In entered order)
The Song of Onyx
A Mercenary's Life
No Rest for the Weary

I skimmed almost all the stories quite frankly because none really caught my attention immediately off the bat. There wasn't that immediate impact on the reader that makes me want to continue reading. I think one flaw most of the stories shared, some more than others, was that each one used the words "I, He, She" everywhere. It's annoying to read "I" 3 or 4 times in one sentence, and then read it 3 or 4 more times in the next sentence.
But overall, it was a great effort by everyone, and this contest is a great idea.
 

DeletedUser

I voted for The Song of Onyx, A mercenerys life, and the last duel. Well Done guys :D
 

DeletedUser

Yea, i noticed mine did that. I wrote it in 5 minutes since I was bored. Really isn't good work, so no expectation to win.
 

DeletedUser

The winner of the contest is Victor Kruger - A Mercenary's Life

Congratulations Victor. Your story will appear in The West's official newspaper The Broken Saddle.
 
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