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I voted for my Top 3: (In entered order)
The Song of Onyx
A Mercenary's Life
No Rest for the Weary
I skimmed almost all the stories quite frankly because none really caught my attention immediately off the bat. There wasn't that immediate impact on the reader that makes me want to continue reading. I think one flaw most of the stories shared, some more than others, was that each one used the words "I, He, She" everywhere. It's annoying to read "I" 3 or 4 times in one sentence, and then read it 3 or 4 more times in the next sentence.
But overall, it was a great effort by everyone, and this contest is a great idea.
The Song of Onyx
A Mercenary's Life
No Rest for the Weary
I skimmed almost all the stories quite frankly because none really caught my attention immediately off the bat. There wasn't that immediate impact on the reader that makes me want to continue reading. I think one flaw most of the stories shared, some more than others, was that each one used the words "I, He, She" everywhere. It's annoying to read "I" 3 or 4 times in one sentence, and then read it 3 or 4 more times in the next sentence.
But overall, it was a great effort by everyone, and this contest is a great idea.